Well i was really excited when Mr.Fred came to our class because, Ms. Erudite had told us that he was going to come in our class and talk about ghost stories. when she said that i thought to myself maybe he is going to come in here and tell us about his life and how he has expirence everything about ghost. when he came in our class he was alright he told us who he was and why was he here for. He was here because he thought that he could make us write a script (play) with in two weeks. we were acting the first days and watching some part of a movies that we had acted.
A week after it was show time Mr. Rapport had us doing our scripts and homework. Out of all the students in the class which are twenty five, only four or six people had done it. Fred was mad and he had all the right to be because only four,six students commidite to the work and struggle to do all his work. I had done all my work and everything, we didnt have the computers that day so i wrote my script in paper that day i was exsausted from my football practice so i was heading home i was in the bus when oi got home i ate did homework and then showered. I always fix my cloth and stuff for the next day when i was looking for my backpack i couldnt find it i had noticed that when i got out the bus i left my backpack behind.
The next day when i showed up to class i had explained what had happen to me and why i lost my backpack. He looked at me that he didnt care he rolled his eyes, when he did that i was trying to do my work again but i guess it didnt work out for me, so i just gave up on it and didnt do anything of it. I just wanted to thank and say sorry to him for me not finishing his homework and for him taking his time and wanting to help us for our future and getting us a schollarship to a good collage.
Wednesday, March 10, 2010
Monday, February 1, 2010
EXPOSITORY ESSAY
My expository essay is about a an author that makes a great story. The name of the story is "Charlotte's Web". This charaters of the story is alot of farm animals, the little girl, and Wilbur which is the main charater of the story he is a pig. Wilbur is brought to the farm as a little baby he gets taken care of by the poeple that own the farm. Wilbur after a while meets alot of friends he meets many farm animals and someone really speacial to him which was a spider called Charlotte. She always looked after wilbur, and always cared for him.
Wilbur grew up to be a big pig and the farmer knew it was time to kill him to eat him. When wibur found out that he was going to get killed he was crying and sad the whole time then after he heared some voices coming from the ceiling he said "huh who's there" then some tiny little voice answered. Charlotte came into wilburs life and said whats wrong wibur he, had explained everything to charlotte and she said no worry wilbur leave everything up to me. Charlotte stayed up all night thinking of what can she do to help that poor little creature, she thought of something and what she did was that she build a spider web right under wilbur that said fabulos pig. The next day when one of the person form the farm went to give wilbur his food he was shocked and he went to go tell everybody that lived there. Many reporters came to the farm and took pitures the next day everything was published into newspapers.
This web thing from charlotte kept going on for many days. Unfortunately this got wilbur into the fair competion to qualified to win a god amount of money. This got wibur out the danger of getting killed. There was just a problem that in the compition there was a pig that already had won the compition for many years and that was three times bigger than wilbur. Charlotte knew she had to do something about it so she bulid another web for wilbur saying "famous pig". That brought wilbur's repition up and he won the whole thing and the prize money. Wilbur was happy that he had won the compition so he wanted to go thank charlotte, when he went to the farm he was screaming out her name after five times of screaming her name she said "Im right here" he said what was wrong she explained to him that she was going to have kids we was happy but, what wilbur didnt know was that spiders died after having kids so she died and when the eggs hatched alot of them left and only five of them stayed with him and he named them and told them that when they grow up they could do a web for him saying that charlotte her mom was a great friend to him.
Wilbur grew up to be a big pig and the farmer knew it was time to kill him to eat him. When wibur found out that he was going to get killed he was crying and sad the whole time then after he heared some voices coming from the ceiling he said "huh who's there" then some tiny little voice answered. Charlotte came into wilburs life and said whats wrong wibur he, had explained everything to charlotte and she said no worry wilbur leave everything up to me. Charlotte stayed up all night thinking of what can she do to help that poor little creature, she thought of something and what she did was that she build a spider web right under wilbur that said fabulos pig. The next day when one of the person form the farm went to give wilbur his food he was shocked and he went to go tell everybody that lived there. Many reporters came to the farm and took pitures the next day everything was published into newspapers.
This web thing from charlotte kept going on for many days. Unfortunately this got wilbur into the fair competion to qualified to win a god amount of money. This got wibur out the danger of getting killed. There was just a problem that in the compition there was a pig that already had won the compition for many years and that was three times bigger than wilbur. Charlotte knew she had to do something about it so she bulid another web for wilbur saying "famous pig". That brought wilbur's repition up and he won the whole thing and the prize money. Wilbur was happy that he had won the compition so he wanted to go thank charlotte, when he went to the farm he was screaming out her name after five times of screaming her name she said "Im right here" he said what was wrong she explained to him that she was going to have kids we was happy but, what wilbur didnt know was that spiders died after having kids so she died and when the eggs hatched alot of them left and only five of them stayed with him and he named them and told them that when they grow up they could do a web for him saying that charlotte her mom was a great friend to him.
Thursday, January 28, 2010
Literary treasure
In visions of the dark night
I have dreamed of joy departed-
But a waking dream of life and light
Hath left me broken-hearted
.Ah! what is not a dream by day
To him whose eyes are cast
On things around him with a ray
Turned back upon the past?
That holy dream- that holy dream,
While all the world were chiding
,Hath cheered me as a lovely beam
A lonely spirit guiding.
What though that light, thro' storm and night,
So trembled from afar-
What could there be more purely bright
In Truth's day-star?
Edgar Allan Poe was a great person and he wrote some good poems. I know a litle about his story once edgar allan poe wrote a famous story. He won a prize of writing the poem I realy dont remember the name of the poem he wrote. After that edgar deticated him self to just writing poem. Edgar Allan Poe wrote a story called "The Cask Of Amontillado", the story was about him making himself famous and there was a day were everybody in the city dressed as a clown edgar use to drink alot, and he was marrried to his cousin. The person took advantage of edagr and when he was drunk he took him to the dungen. From there i didnt know what happen.
I have dreamed of joy departed-
But a waking dream of life and light
Hath left me broken-hearted
.Ah! what is not a dream by day
To him whose eyes are cast
On things around him with a ray
Turned back upon the past?
That holy dream- that holy dream,
While all the world were chiding
,Hath cheered me as a lovely beam
A lonely spirit guiding.
What though that light, thro' storm and night,
So trembled from afar-
What could there be more purely bright
In Truth's day-star?
Edgar Allan Poe was a great person and he wrote some good poems. I know a litle about his story once edgar allan poe wrote a famous story. He won a prize of writing the poem I realy dont remember the name of the poem he wrote. After that edgar deticated him self to just writing poem. Edgar Allan Poe wrote a story called "The Cask Of Amontillado", the story was about him making himself famous and there was a day were everybody in the city dressed as a clown edgar use to drink alot, and he was marrried to his cousin. The person took advantage of edagr and when he was drunk he took him to the dungen. From there i didnt know what happen.
my culture
I wonder about me sometimes
How I look to others
I try to be friendly
And yet
I do not know if others
realize that
I am a simple person
I write my poetry from my heart
Do others hear me?
I wonder
Some people give comments
that are not desirable
Should I tell them or wait
Maybe they will write more
Or maybe they wont
I keep on trying to live My life for myself and no one else But can I?
I don't know I'm always look for someone to critize what I've written and more
Oh well, here I sit Silently writing for someone to listen for someone to care
How I look to others
I try to be friendly
And yet
I do not know if others
realize that
I am a simple person
I write my poetry from my heart
Do others hear me?
I wonder
Some people give comments
that are not desirable
Should I tell them or wait
Maybe they will write more
Or maybe they wont
I keep on trying to live My life for myself and no one else But can I?
I don't know I'm always look for someone to critize what I've written and more
Oh well, here I sit Silently writing for someone to listen for someone to care
Monday, January 25, 2010
narratvie song lyrics
[MR.Capone-E] As I hold my glock Sur walking down the street and never will I f*****g stop Call the cops open shots as I hit the corner Hi power soldiers from California to Arizona.
As i grew up in the streets i was learning many bad things in life. There was alot of drama going on, there were drive by's and alot of killing and fights between gangs crews and for basicly drugs. Things were getting worst i got involved into a crew called f.o.k it stand for "f**k other crews". The dudes from there had told me if you want to get in the crew you have to do this to your best friend. I told them " I cant he is like a brother to me , but ill do something else". They told me NO you have to do it. I was going through alot those days so i was like THUG LIGE, so i went fore it i went to his house and I jumped him and took his money and gold chain. After that day i kept thinking to my self WHY? why did i do something stupid I had regreat everything I did. That night i couldnt sleep at all so i decided to go to my friends house and give him his stuff back and explain what i did to him and why.
He didnt forgive me at all he told me thanks for giving me my gold chain back this meant everything to me i was sad and mad at myself. The next day when i went to the dudes from the crew, they told me "hey did you get what we told you" i had to lie and said no he wasnt home. I left and i knew that my friend ronnie wasnt going to forgive me for what i had done to him so that same day he went and he told the F.O.K. that i had done this to him. The next day when i should up i came up to them and gave them part of my money and my gold chain, they looked mad at me so they jumped me took my money and my chain. I didnt think they would of done that to me. I thought wow thats how maybe ronnie felt? I knew what it feels like to get something taken away from you? And i knew what was it like to lose a friend that was like a brother to me?
As i grew up in the streets i was learning many bad things in life. There was alot of drama going on, there were drive by's and alot of killing and fights between gangs crews and for basicly drugs. Things were getting worst i got involved into a crew called f.o.k it stand for "f**k other crews". The dudes from there had told me if you want to get in the crew you have to do this to your best friend. I told them " I cant he is like a brother to me , but ill do something else". They told me NO you have to do it. I was going through alot those days so i was like THUG LIGE, so i went fore it i went to his house and I jumped him and took his money and gold chain. After that day i kept thinking to my self WHY? why did i do something stupid I had regreat everything I did. That night i couldnt sleep at all so i decided to go to my friends house and give him his stuff back and explain what i did to him and why.
He didnt forgive me at all he told me thanks for giving me my gold chain back this meant everything to me i was sad and mad at myself. The next day when i went to the dudes from the crew, they told me "hey did you get what we told you" i had to lie and said no he wasnt home. I left and i knew that my friend ronnie wasnt going to forgive me for what i had done to him so that same day he went and he told the F.O.K. that i had done this to him. The next day when i should up i came up to them and gave them part of my money and my gold chain, they looked mad at me so they jumped me took my money and my chain. I didnt think they would of done that to me. I thought wow thats how maybe ronnie felt? I knew what it feels like to get something taken away from you? And i knew what was it like to lose a friend that was like a brother to me?
modeled after george ella lyon
WHERE IM FROM ?
I am five foot eight
I dont like to skate
When mom takes me to bakery i eat alot of cake
Every saturday mornings my friends and I go play
When we come back we eat gummy bears and drink pepsi
I was raised by my mom and only her
She's taken good care of me till this day
She gets mad at me when i get home late
I was raised in Los Angeles California
Whe i grow up i want to visit Ethiopia
I was born on August twenty six
My favorite food is pizza with bread sticks
I am five foot eight
I dont like to skate
When mom takes me to bakery i eat alot of cake
Every saturday mornings my friends and I go play
When we come back we eat gummy bears and drink pepsi
I was raised by my mom and only her
She's taken good care of me till this day
She gets mad at me when i get home late
I was raised in Los Angeles California
Whe i grow up i want to visit Ethiopia
I was born on August twenty six
My favorite food is pizza with bread sticks
vocabulary narrative
TRAGEDY
Tragedy means many different things in many ways. Tragedy means when someone suffers something really horrible. Example someone's death or something speacial in your life. An example say if you lose a family member,maybe a father. Thats a tragedy they will have for there rest of there life,there aint noting you could do to bring that person back to life or anybody that could replace them.
Another meaning of tragedy is a type of genre that moves work. Meaning comedy,action,romance ect. Many jobs use that, people that make movies. They use it in studios to make a movie emotional. Another job that uses it, ia the authors, authors are people that write novels,stories in books,magizines ect.
Tragedy means many different things in many ways. Tragedy means when someone suffers something really horrible. Example someone's death or something speacial in your life. An example say if you lose a family member,maybe a father. Thats a tragedy they will have for there rest of there life,there aint noting you could do to bring that person back to life or anybody that could replace them.
Another meaning of tragedy is a type of genre that moves work. Meaning comedy,action,romance ect. Many jobs use that, people that make movies. They use it in studios to make a movie emotional. Another job that uses it, ia the authors, authors are people that write novels,stories in books,magizines ect.
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